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2018年高考英语通用版二轮专题复习三维课件:题型6 书面表达 第2讲 力避高级表达中的“低级错误”别“伤了大雅”

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* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 考生问题作文(选自2015年全国卷Ⅱ) Dear Lucy,         I’m writing to tell you that we’ll go to the local nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival, that is the day for us to show respect for the elderly.I’m wondering if or not you would like to go with us.         As you know it, warmth and care is elderly people need.So besides tasty dumplings and cakes, we decide to organize some wonderful singing and dancing programs for them, I believe it will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.         If you will be able to join us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.         Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 判为四档作文,得分18分 阅卷人升格作文 Dear Lucy,         I’m writing to tell you that we’ll go to the local nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival, which is the day for us to show respect for the elderly.I’m wondering whether or not you would like to go with us.         As you know, warmth and care is what elderly people need.So besides tasty dumplings and cakes, we decide to organize some wonderful singing and dancing programs for them, which I believe will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.         If you are able to join us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.        Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 判为五档作文,得分24分 阅卷人说:左栏文章应用了很多高级句式,如定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句,应该算是一篇相当不错的文章,但文章中出现的几处错误难免会让阅卷人略生厌恶之感,因而评分也就会低一个档次。而右栏的文章只改掉了左栏文章中的一些表达错误,其他未做任何修饰,评分就由18分增加到24分,在1分压倒万人的高考中,可谓字字千金。 * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 第2讲      力避高级表达中的“低级错误”,别“伤了大雅”










在阅卷中,阅卷老师常为这样一类卷摇头叹息,无论是从要点的呈现、表达的优美还是衔接的顺畅等方面来看该类卷都近乎完美,应该给高分甚至满分,但偏偏有几处瑕疵给本应完美的习作陡添了些许不和谐的音符,甚至有点刺眼,从而影响了阅卷老师的好心情。阅卷老师为了稳妥起见,在阅卷中尽量避免有争议卷的出现,会“惋惜”地扣掉一些分数。因“低级错误”而影响高级得分,岂不遗憾!










一、阅卷实录——他人之失,引以为戒










二、易错练通——典题精选,练中品悟










Ⅰ.单句改错
1.I have a good command of English, it is an advantage when applying for a job like this.				                       
2.No one can deny the fact the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously. 									               
3.The reason is why smartphones nowadays can be used to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through 
QQ and WeChat.															           










it→which或it前加and
fact后加that
why→that
4.Every time when I see someone in need, I will spare no effort to help him.														          
5.Firstly, its good to take buses or other means of public 
transportation rather than cars whenever it possible.
                                    
6.It was in the park where I came across my previous English teacher.														             
7.It is high time that both children and parents take action to make small changes.		                             










去掉when
去掉whenever后的it或possible前加is
where→that
take→took或take前加should
8.I would appreciate if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.																	         
9.Only in this way people from all over the world communicate easily and effectively.					             
10.With the College Entrance Examination comes near, I’m worried about what my life will be like as we may 
go to different universities.                           










if前加it
way后加can
comes→coming或With→As
Ⅱ.习作纠错









下面三篇学生习作中都运用了一些高级句式,而且都出现了一些错误,请找出其中的错误并加以改正。










1.(2017·淄博市模拟)假定你是李华。你的好朋友王辉本学期去了加拿大留学,在给你的信中倾诉了他遇到的困难:上课听不懂老师英语授课、没有朋友、压力大等,你决定给他一些建议。请根据以下要点提示写一封回信。
要点提示:1.多记词汇,多阅读当地报纸等;
2.多参加活动,与同学们交朋友;
3.积极乐观,多加强体育锻炼等有助于缓解压力。










注意:1.词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Hui,
I was sorry to hear that you had trouble in your studies. 
 
Yours,
Li Hua










[学生习作]
Dear Wang Hui,
I was sorry to hear that you had trouble in your studies.I would like to share some advice with you on how to study efficiently.
Firstly, you can talk with some close friends about your problems and ask for their help.This is an important way to deal with your problems directly.Secondly, try to study in a positive way.This will decrease your study pressure, make studying an easy job.Thirdly, spend time doing exercise.Not 










only exercise build up our body, but also it provides time for us to refresh our mind.Lastly, you can listen to some smoothing music, that will be a good way to improve your current depressed mood.
I hope all this information can benefit you.
Yours,
Li Hua










[我来纠错]
第六句:第八句:第九句:









make→making
exercise前加does
that→which
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period in each school day for individual study.










Thank you very much for your attention!










[学生习作]
Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period in each school day for individual study.
According to the survey, more than half of the students feel beneficial to do so and 15 percent hold an opposite view.In addition, the rest seem to care little about it.










As for me, the time for individual study helps us students in many ways.Firstly, the period will serve as an open opportunity to review that we?ve learned previously.
Also, we can use this period to do our homework so that we have more time to preview the lessons.Moreover, we can turn to the teachers or classmates immediately when we encounter any problems of learning.Only by using our time more efficiently we become a better learner.
Thank you very much for your attention!










[我来纠错]
第三句:第六句:第七句:第八句:第九句:









feel后加it; and→while
that→what
have前加can/will
去掉when
we前加can
3.(2017·长春市质检)假定你是李华。你班同学在今天的英语课上就“高中生是否应该在学校使用智能手机”进行了课堂讨论,同学们的观点不一。请你根据下面内容,为本次课堂讨论结果撰写一篇英文报道,内容应该包括:
1.活动简介;
2.支持者理由:联系父母方便;上网便捷,有益学习;
3.反对者理由:影响学习;手机游戏消磨意志;
4.你的观点。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。










Smartphones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students. 










                                                                               
                                                                                











[学生习作]
Smartphones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students.Therefore, today in our English class a discussion was held about if we senior school students should use smartphones at school.Opinions are different.










Students who in favor of it consider it convenient to contact their parents when it necessary.Besides, they point out it is smartphones give them access to the Internet and thus benefit their study.While others hold the opposite opinions.They find easy for some students to be addicted to playing the smartphones, that has a negative effect on their studies.Worse still, it can also discourage students? will.
Personally, as long as you can control yourself and use it properly, you can take it.










[我来纠错]
第二句:第四句:第五句: 
第七句:









if→whether
who后加are或去掉who; 去掉necessary前面的
it或necessary前加is
give前加that
find后加it; that→which
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